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Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

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Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby swrider » Fri Jun 10, 2016 1:18 pm

Name Comenzar Lunation
Image
Species Nobility
Career Commander
Spec. Figure head

WT 11
ST 12
Armor: Defense: 0, Soak: 1, HP: 0, Encumbrance: 1, Rarity: 5, Cost: 1


BR 2
Ag2
In 2
CU 2
Wil 3
Pr 4

Skills;
Coercion 0
Cool 2
Discipline 1
leadership 1
negotiation 1
perception 1
vigilance 1
ranged light 1
charm 1
core worlds 0
warfare 0
melee 1

Talents
Decadence: Remove a black from checks to resist the effects of intoxicants and other indulgences.

background

The middle of three triplet males, the eldest sons of banking tycoon Primero Lunation. Comenzar, was settled to live a quiet life running the core business of the dynastys banking empire while his elder brother Terminar explored the great unknown expanding the dynasties wealth, influence and power. Comenzar world was recently shattered by the return of his brother’s flagship. A recent repossession of a colony went horribly wrong. The colony had been destroyed by a Xeno plague which ravaged the landing party. Terminar, always leading from the front, had lead that party personally. His body contained within a biological containment had been returned to the family where it could be seen before incineration. With little time left to remain their father called Comenzar and his younger triplet Esperar into the corporate headquarters informing them that Comenzar would captain the ship back into the outer regions. His brother Esperar would lead dynasty operations within the empire, both under the directions of their father.
The family had long since acquired a Warrant of trade held Comenzar’s father. It was now his obligation to act as acting Rogue Trader taking upon himself the mantle of his brother. As the ship prepared to leave imperial space the parting words of his father rang in Comenzar’s ears: “Use your advisors, but trust no one!”

Personality: a charismatic figure within in his fathers dynasty. Comenzar often uses wits and charm to avoid trouble or confrontation. Favoring negotiations over violence he was well suited to a life at the dynasty headquarters supporting his elder brother. Hesitant with his new found responsibilities Comenzar has a lot to learn about becoming the rogue trader.

Motivation: Family Impress father in order to inherit warrant of trade.

Gear:
Assetts: 5
Under Armor:Defense: 0, Soak: 1, HP: 0, Encumbrance: 1, Rarity: 5, Cost: 1
Chrono: A timekeeping devise, typically warn on the wrist or by chain from a pocket.

Encumbrance: 0, Rarity: 1, Cost: 0
Magnoculars: Magnifies visual images. Available from 10:1 to 1000:1

Encumbrance: 0, Rarity: 1, Cost: 0

Laspistol: The basic sidearm of the 41st millennium. What it lacks in stopping power it makes up for in reliability and economy.

Dam: 4, Crit: 5, Rg: Medium, HP: 1, Sp: (Reliable, Infinite), Enc: 1, Rare: 1, Cost: 0
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Re: Comenzar Lunation

Postby Quicksilver » Fri Jun 10, 2016 1:56 pm

Looks pritty cool - I'd completely forgotten about the Figure Head Specialization - that seems perfect. You'll have to switch out "Human" for one of the Home Worlds I'll post later, but otherwise looks like a good start.
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby swrider » Fri Jun 10, 2016 2:01 pm

let me know what you think about the dynasty idea I posted in the other thread please.
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby swrider » Fri Jun 10, 2016 2:08 pm

never mind I saw your post.
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby swrider » Sat Jun 11, 2016 10:15 am

Main post edited.
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby swrider » Tue Jun 21, 2016 1:17 pm

Main post edited. Race now nobility. Raising Presence to 4 now only cost 40 while raising will to 3 cost 50. before it was 70 +30=100. the extra 10 xp from the ability switch was used to keep the skills I purchased with a humans normal extra 10 xp at character creation (110xp vs 100).
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby Quicksilver » Tue Jun 28, 2016 3:11 pm

I think you lost me somewhere, I count that you should have 10 skills (4 career, 2 specialization, 2 Noble, 2 XP), and you listed 13. You mind double checking your math. Some physical description would also be nice, or a picture. Otherwise it's shaping up to be a great character.
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby swrider » Tue Jul 05, 2016 7:17 am

I apologize for the delay. I will get gear selected and the skills sorted out tomorrow. (I'm doing a hospital inspection today.)
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby swrider » Wed Jul 06, 2016 12:08 pm

I have updated my skills. do ST and WT still get the boost from Wil and BR or are the just what is listed under the homeworlds?
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby Quicksilver » Wed Jul 06, 2016 2:26 pm

You still get the normal will/brawn
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby swrider » Wed Jul 06, 2016 3:32 pm

ok I think I got it ready for review.
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby Quicksilver » Wed Jul 06, 2016 3:47 pm

A little personality and (physical) description would be good, but otherwise looks great!

Once that's down, I think it's ready.
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby swrider » Thu Jul 07, 2016 1:20 pm

I have added a picture and a brief description of personality. His personality wont really be flushed out until the game begins as it will unlikely evolve as the game begins and its first few encounters.
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Re: Comenzar Lunation (rogue trader)

Postby Quicksilver » Thu Jul 07, 2016 1:25 pm

Looks awsome, you may transfer at will.
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